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I saw you walk past me in my dreams.And man I wish someone wouldwake me from this fantasy.I wish my dreams would come true, I want you to be standing next to me.
But I, guess I'm a little crazy for wishing on a shooting star, hoping my fantasy would come true.Cause, I keep on turnen and I keep on wishen on the same star.Hopen my chance would get stronger each and everytime.
So I guess your just a figure of imagination.Your face your eyes, their just part of a lie.But I wont give up until I find you once again, in my, little, fantasy world.
But I, guess I'm a little crazy for wishing on a shooting star, hoping my fantasy would come true.Cause, I keep on turnen and I keep on wishen on the same star.Hopen my chance would get stronger each and everytime.
- Title: Fantasy
- Artist: inmortis
- Description: I need to write a song for my book, and I thought it came out pretty good!!
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: fantasy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- albino_dude94 - 01/07/2009
- Pretty good, though I must agree with Uchiha, I give it a 3/5 although, I'm a doofus and I'm a much better judge if I hear things, so only then can I give a full report so...sorry as well.
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- Uchiha_Sasuke_Dragon - 01/05/2009
- A little short but over all good it would be a bit better if you had a bit more in the bodys as aposed to the chorus. 3/5 sorry -_-!
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- S h i z z l e P o p s - 01/04/2009
- 1 question. Why does the last paragraph in the poem the same as the 2nd. But other then that i think it is a 4/5
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- Master Of Slytherin - 01/04/2009
- pretty good 4/5
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