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v1) life was so much better
when you were around
now life is a clutter
now that you are abound
missing jigsaw pieces
layen everywhere
just give me the key
to where you are
c) Mysterious
stranger
tell me where u are
Mysterious
stranger
stayin in my heart
telll me where you are!!
v2) life is still a mess
now that im obssessed
why cant you tell me
where is the key??
c) Mysterious
stranger
tell me where you are
Mysterious
stranger
stayin in my heart
tell me where you are!!
b) i lay here,
tryin to rid my fear
that you will never
ever come home
c) Mysterious
stranger
my heart is lost
without you here
in my arms
mysterious
stranger
just tell me where you are.........
- by TikTokTikTok |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Mysterious
- Artist: TikTokTikTok
- Description: I am writing this song, and need some feedback.
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: mysterious
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TikTokTikTok - 01/20/2009
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Ok, thanks for being the only one with feedback. I will try to edit it, but I am not that great of a writer. I am reading songwriting for dummies, so I might get a little info out of that. lol
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- No Daisy Cutting - 01/02/2009
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it seems kinda 80ish.
but still good. - Report As Spam