-
I was walking,
down the hall,
Scared and alone,
In this huge mall.
I saw you from a window,
With a sparkle in your eye,
Looking at your sweat face,
Makes me whant to cry.
You stand up from the chair,
Give me a sweet glare,
You smile a toothy smile,
Im dreaming all the while.
You slide to my side,
And whisper in my ear,
Don't worry Im nice,
No need for fear.
I trusted you,
As I did my dad,
I could tell thie trust,
Made you more than glad.
The DJ starts playing,
Your favorite song,
You take my hand and twirl me,
Oh you seemed so stong.
Our first date was like heaven,
And those big golden gates,
I knew right then and there,
Each other were our fates.
You drove me back to my moms,
And kissed me with sweat care,
I could smeel the Lilac scent,
On your golden hair.
Walking up the driveway,
Just as you drove away,
I waved goodbye,
You started to cry.
As you pull out,
You start to shout,
Move, get out of the way,
This was my last living day.
I didn't know what happened,
All I did was cry,
i knew I'd never see again,
My perfect guy.
Later i am told,
I was shot and fell to the cold,
Concrete driveway,
I couldn't help but shyaway.
I wait at heavens gate,
Hoping that your fate,
Will bring you here,
In fifty years.
Six months later,
As I sit on a white bench,
I hear your voice,
This wouldn't have been my choice.
I screamed and I cried,
I couldn't believe you died,
And met me here so young,
The guilt always hung,
Was it suicide,
Thats when I realized,
What happened that night?
Why am I in a place so bright.
He tracked down my killer,
That was the past,
And It couldn't be changed,
He made our love last.
As the gates opened,
To welcome us in,
He kissed me another time,
And I started to spin.
We were dancing at heavens gates,
I was so proud,
I took a couple steps,
Then we fell through a cloud..
We got a second chance,
At romance,
So we started to dance,
And you gave me a loving glance.
It was the nigh,
Of my death again,
I was about to get out,
Then he started to shout.
We sat in his car for a while,
Then I heard a gun shot,
A window shattered,
And my life was caught.
- by Ti Ni Po Ni |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: Last Chance at a Last Dance
- Artist: Ti Ni Po Ni
- Description: Young teenager falls in love, on way home gets killed, boyfriends dies avenging her, they dance at heavens gates, suprise ending
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: last chance last dance
- Report Post
Comments (3 Comments)
- Dephy - 03/30/2011
-
wow cool
:3
I liked it a lot - Report As Spam
- NarutosTwinSisterKiwi - 03/19/2009
-
That's sad... It's deep. Good job^^ *five stars*
~Kiwi - Report As Spam
- iiReina - 12/31/2008
- cool poem~ i like what happens in it~ 5/5
- Report As Spam