Dangling Decadence

• Artist: Zerosplit
• Description: A friend of mine inspired this one as well as the song Vindicated by Dashboard Confessional.
• Date: 12/27/2008
• Tags: dangling decadence teenagelove love heartbroken

I see a heart it dangles here
So full of hope and misplaced fear.
It is a girl's of that I'm sure,
This now torn heart was once so pure.
Though pure it was, it was naive
And fell for the first soul it believed.
The soul then played a game with the heart
Who not use to these games fell right apart.
The heart now plays games with the rest
Breaking all those who dare to contest.
Shattered they are like she once was
Caught by the demon of misplaced love.
Her soul left her for someone else
So she takes the souls of everyone else.

There it hangs up in the sky,
Her tears they sparkle as she cries.
I see a heart so full of hope,
But whats decayed the heart or rope?

Comments

[Zerosplit]

Thank you Nao and all of you. Responses like yours encourage me to submit more biggrin I hope you like my other ones. It is good to hear your friend can relate to this, even though it is a sad poem I believe that it is good to know there are people out there that feel/experience the same things. It's hard to feel alone. I will definitely read yours as well.

[xDizcord_Lizx]

this...it was just amazing!
and i have a friend who could relate to this poem as well, but this just makes you think, and it was so well written. check out some of mine too ^^ though i think yours are much better 5/5

[RainingMusicDawn]

simply amazing. I love the words. They flow so easily. I give you a five cause u deserve it. And i believe that from one song you can write one thousand words. Keep writing.

[Alexsandria the dark wolf]

its hart breaking. crying 5/5

[whitejade13]

oh my dear this is simply winderful. Just....... wonderful. 5/5 Kudos to you my friend. Kudos.