Outta Luck

• Artist: ElvenFalcon
• Description: I song i just pulled.
  First song to ever write !
  Please comment!
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: outta luck song taylorswift lovesong

As if i needed to say this but EASY WITH THE HATIN COMMENTS talk2hand
Please comment!

Verse 1 -

Rain's clinging to my nose
where I wander is where I go
my hands are cold nowhere to go
but surprisingly inside i'm warm
after a while I pick up the phone
and dial the number that'll take me home

Chorus -

And here he comes in a pick up truck
I question how often i've tried my luck
the i stare into the headlights like a scared buck
And i'm shot out of the sky like a duck
And I realize that i'm Outta Luck

Verse 2 -

Swimmin' in the lake all night long
hummin' over the same old song
I know i'm takin way to long
after a while i ..
pick up the phone
and dial the number that'll take me home

Chorus -

And here he comes in a pick up truck
I question how often i've tried my luck
the i stare into the headlights like a scared buck
And i'm shot out of the sky like a duck
And I realize that i'm Outta Luck

(softly)

And I realise that i'm outta lu-uck

Comments

[Mud99]

"sigh" I hate reading lyrics its fo difficult to really hear how it should actually sound.

[ElvenFalcon]

By the way .. I am aware that the Chorus is random. Inside joke with some friends..

[I izuru kira I]

ill go with a 4/5 great job though

[whitejade13]

Hmmm.... It's quite interesting and I don't think i've read anything quite like it before. It's not bad though. I think I like it. Keep writing. And remember, it doesn't necessarily have to rymn to be good. biggrin