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if i could tell
you
why
i fell in love..
it'd be
for
that
smile
i
first
saw.
an essence of
an angel
or the
twilight
of the
morning
dawn.
it just might
be
the first
phase
of a cresent
moon.
can you
see?
this feeling
growing
my angel
has a halo
even though
it made of cellophane.
- by darksangel34 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: i want to see u smile.
- Artist: darksangel34
- Description: i wrote this when i was happy and heartbroken...soooo rate and comment!!
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: want smile
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xxunbreakable7xx - 06/04/2009
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lovely! :]
you rock my socks! haha.
i can say that cuz im yur cousin! mmwahahah!
oh yes world, be jealous!!! pahahahaha! biggrin - Report As Spam
- darksangel34 - 01/17/2009
- ok for future reference i dont want to be judged on my spelling but on how well i did it...ok?
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- white horse93 - 01/14/2009
- thanks for commenting mine smile loved it! like the others said though, spelling wasn't that good. still, 5/5 for the emotion and thought put into it. what is poetry but the rawest form of your emotions on paper? (or in this case, glowing screen, but whatever)
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- Unworthy Misfit - 01/05/2009
- Ok, this is great only you misspelled some and you didn't uppercase the I's. 4/5
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- Xxkaitlyn923xX - 01/01/2009
- nice smile
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- Creepy Cute Pixie - 12/21/2008
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heart simply like that ^^ 4/5 only bad was the spelling ^^ But love it anyway biggrin
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