Alone...

• Artist: Wolflustre
• Description: This is a poem that I made during the time that I was alone 2 years back when my parents left on a business trip. I was left only with my neighbor, and I felt very lonely. I spent a few hours on this, I suppose, trying to get the rhymes right. BTW, it IS my first poem ever
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: alone poem long

I am alone at the break of light,
not a single soul in sight.
No one to see my cry at night,
and no one to see me write.

I write this poem in the name of sorrow,
for I am alone as a apple tree.
I am alone day and night,
oh God please just hear my plea.

Just send someone to me,
my family, my friends, I beg of you.
All so close just out of reach,
no wonder I'm feeling so blue.

When I watch the sunset...
who is that up on the hill?
I have a feeling...
it's the pretty girl from the mill.

Comments

[kamahaazi]

Its good, but if I were you I would stay on the topic. Ryhme schemes are not that necesary

[ninja yumi789]

awww it okay seen a better jk jk jk that was mean