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Ears hidden behind raven hair
Hugging close as if afraid to show themselves.
Dressed mostly in black
Though not seen as one that hates
Giving greetings with laughs and cheerful actions.
Viewed as a giant compared to family
But a shrimp to those on the streets.
A young adult in the eyes of others
But inside the heart of a playful child
Only appearing to those befriended.
Though this person shows such a friendly smile
Some question the thought of any dark past
But this person keeps them guessing with their multiple show of emotions.
A voice rarely heard
From a shy deer like person
Afraid to speak out into the world.
Laying in thought most of their time
Of things others might think not of thinking
This person does not fear this
But curious of the world
Of how it works its many wonders.
Not even many years of thinking would answer this person’s most thought out thought,
“What will the future bring?”
- by Yookami-kun |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Only Me
- Artist: Yookami-kun
- Description: It's like a self-portrait of myself but in writing.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: only yookamikun self portrait
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Lady Emergency - 03/08/2009
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I love this idea...very creative!
Might I make one suggestion, though?
Have you ever heard of the term "Show not tell"?
If you have, I think showing the reader more of yourself rather than just telling them. (:
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