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heart Spring heart
Spring the start of new life
How the rain showers down
On the newly beginning life
Down here on our hopeful world
We well be grateful for this gift
The gift of Spring's rain heart
- Title: Spring
- Artist: coldlie
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Description:
a little short poem...
hope u like it - Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: spring
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- God damn, I must have been drunk. I really have no idea how I thought you misspelled it. I apologize. 2.75/5 is my new score. Forgive me if you will, it matters little, now.
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- You misspelled "grateful". It is also very cliche and repetitive. 1/5.
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