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I'm lost.
You've left me all alone
And I'm waiting for you
to come back and lead me home.
But you never will.
Because they have taken you away.
You, and everything good in my life.
But, what is that?
That on the horizion?
Coming to me?
Could it be true is it really you?
Alas, it was not,
But I will not give up hope.
For hope is all we can have
in these desolate years.
But what is this?
This on My doorstep?
A red rose?
The color of our eternal love?
With the message,
our message,
'You will always be my love, eternal angel
Ah,
my love,
I hold you close to my heart,
But I fear you will never return,
My eternal soldier.
- by Burnt Lemonade |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: Eternal Soldier, Eternal Angel
- Artist: Burnt Lemonade
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Description:
Ahhh, yet another depressing poem from yours truly! Well, at least it comes from the heart!
This one's for you, Leai chan! This is my sad excuse for a Christmas present!
AND! {INSERT DRAMATIC MUSIC HERE!} FOR EVERY RATE, I'LL DONATE 5 GOLD TO HER WISH LIST! - Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: eternal love soldier
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- Somewhat original. I enjoyed it mildly. I might suggest working on imagery, or such. 2.5/5.
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- rokiki - 12/09/2008
- that was amazing....I love it!! <3
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- Kuma Naru - 12/09/2008
- OMG....THAT JUST TOTALLY MADE ME TEAR. I love it great job!
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