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can't we have a minute or two?
to come face to face you know
just name the place and
I'ma be there half an hour early
so I can feel the joy in my chest
while waiting for...
even if you' re late a couple of ticks
it'll feel like forever to sit
in front of the building
watch the crowd walk by and you're not in it
doubt reach a limit
then you surprise me
with your presence,
the dopest present of all
totally in awe
by the simple fact that you came
plus you answered my call
my body love you like water
dry land thirst to the highest order
sweet memory saved on recorder
two pal birds sitting on the border
so much on my mind and yet
before I lay to rest I find the space to
think about a long lost friend
wherever the excitement went
so did the air and the heavenly scent
now the stench of my own breath
got me sucking on a fruit of death,
real life and debt around the world
got me fiending on the times we spent
I don't know, how the two relate but they do, see
believe you me
I never felt so wanted
like a fugitive on a poster
but you already had me
like a coaster on the bottom of a fine glass
translucent the most
a reason to pass n' pour from a sealed bottle
we can crack shells like a pair of sea otters
gaze like crystal
geyser with the mineral
rich with the natural gift
my body love you like water
dry land thirst to the highest order
sweet memory saved on recorder
two pal birds sitting on the border
now break it down like.
- by Death is always watching |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: For her eye's only.
- Artist: Death is always watching
- Description: ok so basically i worte this for a girl who i've had a crush on since the 6th grade and now im in the 10th so yea read and rate and comment!
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: eyes only
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Comments (4 Comments)
- candy456rer - 07/15/2009
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umm
idk
i think i liked it
so i give you
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- NakedJack - 03/24/2009
- I would just like to say to Alitare. The imagery is going to be weak, its a ********' poem, not a painting. Go look at a ********' picture if you want some imagery. Expressing a lot of ideas or telling a story, is the only thing poetry can do better than music and visual art.
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- I found your imagery to be weak, and the grammar to be of poor account. 2/5.
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- Toxic_Pinup_ - 12/08/2008
- how cute, in a way kinda sad. a mysterious love who probably doesnt know u love them. i feel your pain, and for emotion and feeling and an amazing poem u my friend get 5/5
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