Broken

• Artist: x blossoming-innocence x
• Description: A poem I did in the middle of World Geo class. lol
  When I made this my intention was to show how it feels when you have feelings for more than one person, and expressing how that internal conflict can damage you and those people. But I'm sure others can relate to this in their own way too. ^^
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: broken

To have everything and lose it
shattered to peices bit by bit.

Feeling split and stretched
but one's heart can not take it
for the task is too far fetched

Loving one...yet loving another...
trusting them....and trusting the other

On your feet, and in the dust
confuzed and numbed by the state of lust

Cut open, exposed, crimson regret
the gamble is high
the risk's on the bet.

They give it their all
you give them a-lot!

But shall this dream take force?

The probability is NOT.

Comments

[Eternity Lasts]

aww 5/5

[Kagurome]

Touched me, i love it...keep up the good work. You gotta be careful out there.

[Okuri-Inu The Oni]

wow this is like me kinda o_o 5/5 ^_^

[iCandii-Chan]

5/5 ur waaay better than me! :3

[krazii13]

how do you do it? You always seem to hit the target when it comes to writing poetry. . . Great job

[Nikki4815]

I really like it. *favorites* 5/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message", and I recently added "Lost in the World"