Heartbreak in D minor

• Artist: Kanashii Aiyoku
• Description: When you go to someone in pure confidence over something, you don't expect to me made fun of...you expect someone to listen and tell you positive things. And if they think you need improvement, they don't laugh, they tell you how to improve. What right does a person have to judge another? We were not BORN great, we become it with time and patience. To the person involved, I do hope you read this and understand why I was hurt.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: heartbreak hurt pain distress trust

I came to you in confidence
To be laughed at
And joked at
And then hurt again
I hope you get
The point of all this
I was crying
And it made me
Physically sick
That night I slept
Tired by all of my pain
And even the next morning
I had to refrain
From trying to call you
So now it is night
And my friend
I hope it pleases you
To know that I am
A broken,
Empty shell
My day wasn't pleasant
In fact it was Hell
Wondering why
After all of this time
You choose all of a sudden
To hurt me one night
But it's okay now
You have been
Forgiven
But I still do wonder
Why you kept it hidden
If you wanted to say it
You shouldn't have tried
To make me feel happy
If really you lied
So why hurt me now
When I came with such glee
And excitement that
Filled me so merrily
So yes I'll say it
Again and again
I couldn't stay angry
So maybe you win
But do not think once
That I will forget
That you hurt me once
And could do so again
So learn from mistakes
Don't try to erase
And that would be enough
To put a smile, though perhaps weak,
On my face

Comments

[Chocolate Mudkips]

In my case, I was the one who hurt someone very dear to me. I've been forgiven, but I can't forgive myself, to the point that it feels like a vice is gripping my chest whenever I see that person. Sometimes I wonder if they're experiencing the same pain as me.
What I see from your poetry is that you're experiencing a mess of uplifting joy and irrevocable sorrow, meagerly patched together by the threads of love. I know how you feel. Five stars~