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I never knew wht it was like
To be so scrayed, to be in fright.
To trust in no one, not even your friend
To see tht no one has help to lend.
To hate yourself, and wish to die
To always believe in ruthless lies.
I never knew the world was cold
I never was taught, i never was told.
I never knew thts all i can say
until something happen tht horrible day.
It opened my eyes to lies, cold, and hate
Tht the hero we need is running quite late.
Tht Happynees, love, and joy
Are just some broken, unused toy.
Tht the sun itself, the sorce of light
Will black out without a fight
Now i never knew until tht day my life was upside down
and now i go every were smileing with a frown.
- by rAiNbOwZxLuVxmE |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: I never knew
- Artist: rAiNbOwZxLuVxmE
- Description: Something i just make up as it goes through my head. But it also comes from the things im dealing with in my life.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: never knew
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Adderall Sleep - 12/10/2008
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It's nice, but you have to remember, making it rhyme doesn't make it a poem.
Could you a bit of editing, and re-wording.
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- Zetronille - 12/09/2008
- i love that...its so amazing...you no, anything that comes from a persons head is best ^^ and i hope watever ur dealing w/ in ur life gets solved 5/5
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- Rabbit-eyes - 12/08/2008
- Great work, very emotional and heartfelt. (It could use some spell-checking, but) I like it a lot. <3
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