Rain

• Artist: Crazy_Gothic_Artist
• Description: I wrote this after standing outside in the rain thinking. This is posted by me on ponyisland but a friend suggested I put it here too.please vote and comment!
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: rain

The Rain.
Will wash away the pain.
To make us pure again.
Like a second chance for the earth.
Hearlding spring birth
Pounding on the earth an age old beat.
Dropping straight to the ground beneath our feet.
Steady, never changing, always there.
Tell it what you will it doesn't care.
Can it be stopped, forgotten, ignored?
Watching it no matter how long won't make you bored
Some can have more fun when they're in the in the sun
But I prefer to at least for now forget my pain, as I drown it in the rain.

Comments

[iamMegGirl]

luv it gurl! u should totaly enter it in a poetry contest! = )

[ShadowTwinz]

I never knew you wrote poems You talked to me about it then I was wandering around gaia so I so I came read it

[Dear Ximena]

this is bad a** son! lol
its great!
i dont think there is a word that can fully describe it
but i think its a true masterpiece

[x_lHoLLoWl_x]

thiis is a very nice poem ^^

[Atomic Mobile]

huwow. i was like wtf! so cool.

[terrorking1]

hhhhmmm didnt realize you were a poet this is interesting