Trapped

• Artist: clumsy-story of my life
• Description: Well, again another one where I didn't no how I came up with it but It's alsdo another short one...... hope u enjoy!
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: trapped

Stuck in a corner
Backed up against a wall
The way that they treat me
Has me feeling trapped
Ignoring my pleads
Only paying attention to my wrongs
Ordering me about
Treating me like some kind of slave
I want to be free
To spread my wings
And fly
But for right now
I'm stuck in my cocoon
Trapped

Comments

[FieldDoc]

I can't say I haven't felt that way, but I'm not quite... feeling this one. I'll be honest and say I like it, but I'm not quite feeling the poem itself. Keep it up, though, you've got potential.

[clumsy-story of my life]

Oh check out some of my other poems if you like this one!