Opposite

• Artist: Salted Rubber Pants
• Description: A little poem I wrote when I was in 6th grade :)
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: opposite

When I cry you laugh
when I laugh you cry
Why are we so opposite?
Can't love just settle into our hearts
When I love you hate
When I hate you love.
Is it possible that we shall leave each other today?
Or can we stand another day?
My darling why are we so opposite?
I think I love you with all my heart
We must grasp each other so we do not fall apart.
When I see you are blinded
When I am blinded you see.
Love has turned it's back on us
We are so opposite.

Comments

[Nikki4815]

It's pretty good. Maybe it could use some editing? But, for writing it in 6th grade, it's pretty good. 4/5. Rate back? I have 3 poems. Why not visit my gallery?

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

hmm, thats very innocent and truthful... i have a friend that loves someone, and he loves her, but theyre too different and they struggle to keep theyre relationship in check. but thats pretty for 6th grade smile