- there once was an animal who had some fun he found a bun it was actualy a gun he shot his leg then bled and bled and that was the end of mister sun
- by max dog 889 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: mister sun
- Artist: max dog 889
- Description: i made this when i was 9-10 so dont make fun of me i was out side thinkin of an animal called mister sun and i was thinking of a hot dog and a gun so ya plz no mean comments
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: mistersun
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Elyirah - 06/25/2009
- i love it!!! =] 5/5
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- iiLil_emo_PuppeTii - 12/08/2008
- ah! its soo cute!! i like it!! biggrin
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- demcie_the_bartender - 12/08/2008
- @______________@ im scared
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- SoMeOnEsPrciousA_n_G_e_L - 12/06/2008
- wow you actually didint care what people thought of you when you put that up there I givre you 5/5 for being so carless xd its good really good exept for the part were it says "bled and bled"
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- max dog 889 - 12/05/2008
- man i was 9 and 10 i didnt know how to do good poems i have more but i dont have enuph gold
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- Panda Cutie XD - 12/05/2008
- uhh
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- cool_shorty1 - 12/05/2008
- haha funny story max and kinda weird
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