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the razor is slicing my rist.
deeper and deeper it goes, until all i feel is sheer pain.
deeper and deeper it goes, across my rist to the other side
bleeding so much i cant breathe....fainting on the floor...
deeper and deeper it goes....
the razor is slicing my rist.
deeper and deeper it goes
more and more blood now,
i can't breathe...suffering very slowly.
down my arm it drips.
it runs and runs until there no more...
hiding the pain from everyone
the razor is slicing my rist
deeper and deeper it goes
now im in the hospital...
i fainted bc of the blood, it kept going
and going until there was no more
the razor is slicing my rist.
im still cutting even after the hospital trip.
deeper and deeper it goes
its an addiction i can't stop....i try but fail.
crying myself to sleep bc of the millions of scars.
the razor is no longer tempted to cut me, for as i am dead.
it has ruined my life too far.
now i lay in my own blood on the cold floor.
and i close my eyes for the last time.
the deepest it went....
the razor no longer harms me...
as i am dead
the deepest it could go...
- by iSexCandeh |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: deeper and deeper
- Artist: iSexCandeh
- Description: a very sad emo poem which has all happened to me, except for the last 2 stanzas. hope you like it.
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: deeper deeper
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Comments (6 Comments)
- breebree1224 - 05/27/2009
- that is sooo good, its really sad!!
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- pigzFLY - 12/06/2008
- wow..it's sad.
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- G i i NGER BREAD - 12/03/2008
- it's really emotional and good, but check your grammar/spelling!!
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- BeBe-Lee-Lee98 - 12/03/2008
- OMG! THAT IS JUST... EMOTIONAL, IT MADE ME CRY. ME VOTE 4 U. HOPE U LIKE MINE!
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- x_iwolfe - 12/03/2008
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hey fred!
nice poem!
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