Shattered glass

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: comments?
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: shattered glass

Shattered bits of glass
Lay upon the floor
Blood stained pieces
Out of flesh it tore

Like pieces of a puzzle
Each shard playing its part
The glass forms a picture
A picture of my heart

But something’s wrong
I’m one piece down
Where could it have gone?
I then turn around

I see you behind me
Holding the missing part
You put it in place
Then with a smirk you step on my heart

It lay broken again
This time beyond repair
Forever is this empty feeling in my chest
As my heart isn’t there

Comments

[Sunafire]

Good rhythm and layout, but just a tad out of my taste.
I won't mark you down for it though smile It deserves a 4.

[xXx_C H U C H U_xXx]

That's so cute!! You're good at this stuff.. I'm not. Haha.. (I can't find your other poem that you told me to read.)

[hinatagirl1112]

another wonderful piece! good gracious... i have to wait for mine to come to me and they arent near as half as good as yours

[x-tweedle-dum-x]

thats really good i like your rhyming scheme
also it kinda reminds me of the vampire knight intro
*sorry bout relating thing to anime im just a tad obbessed with it* ^^