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• Artist: Elven Reign
• Description: Haha soooooo this is kinda pathetic but it's nice enough.
  
  If anyone could give me any ideas for a title for it, it'd be much appreciated!
  
  COMMENTS WOULD BE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BYE!!!
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: untitled

Seeing you today
I just had to say
Please just go away
You don’t care anyway

Be a man
Don’t tell me you can
Tell me you’ll try
So I don’t have to cry

Love isn’t a life of ease
It’s not some gentle breeze
It’s hard as ever
And never forever

I loved you with all my heart
And I hate being apart
But how could you let me crash
All you did was treat me like trash

Comments

[smile_andwave_girls]

Really nice =)

[persinomm]

>w< I have to agree with you in your description. But nicely done i suppose.

[paranormal 117]

hey its inspiring i just got dumebd ty its really good it cured me of hart broken

[~Shadey Sam~]

I think a good title would be How Could You? since it is in a line of your poem and it sounds right. Plus I liked the poem good job.