my best day ever

• Artist: applesauce262
• Description: you love her secretly,and yet she knows,you go to a movie,and then it really shows
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: best ever love zero ocean

in the dark
the reflection of the screen
lightening your complexion

you sink in the seat
your hand on the edge

not watching the movie
focused on you

you notice my glance
edge your hand to my seat

no movement unnoticed
our hands meet

you start to pull away
but i want you to stay

more than friends know
i realize how your thumb traces the curves of my fingers
i match your every movement
more intent know

you curl up in your seat
leaning closer to me
our eyes meet
the ocean is all i can see

the ocean surrounding your eyes
you will be my demise

because if i dont have you
even if you knew

the feeling i have
cannot be met
by the label of friends

you will be my demise
because if the silk were my hand lies
moves ever again
i will never win

the reward to life
is not by the knife

but by the feeling
of you loving me back

and when we get up
and walk out the door
he will turn around
and our hands will meet no more

though you know the connection
that we will feel everyday
i will still long for that interaction
that we had on sunday

Comments

[nighthammer17]

Unrequited love is a great topic for poetry. I can feel the longing you exoerienced, and the subtle gestures you describe are very sweet and loving.
I am not clear on one part, is the guy she is/was with at the writing of this poem in the theatre with you? If so, I would have loved to have a greater sense of risk, the danger of your loving gestures being discovered.

[applesauce262]

to find any of my other poems just search my name zerorocker262 or tag "zero" to find them,plz vote and comment,if your profile is viewable and allows posts then i will personally thank you for reading,i hope you enjoy

[Lopunny_1256]

I LOVE IT! It touched my heart...you did an awesome job. Keep up the great work!

[ree-ree_bear]

Awesome Kelly hmm this poem really touches how you feel bout that girl and it gives me memories from the past. Keep it up yougin because your poems are so touching now imagine when you get older and your vocabulary kicks it up a notch you will be un-stoppable Keep it goin dont let anyone ever beat you down.
Mucho supporto,
Kyree(:

[sseabrease]

that is what i want to send to a special someone