since when (song)

• Artist: kittykat0605
• Description: songs dont have to ryme,poems do... so anyways. i dont have an ispeation,i just start humming them the songs com so yea.. tis a breakup song..itsony the chourus, the full song is too long
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: since songlove careing forgetting needinmg

since when do you care if im alright, since when do you care how i feel .you never cared about me one you never thought about me twice. when i was bleeding you just stoped and stared, when i was in pain you never cared whats diffrent now...is it the fact you cant go on without me telling you its ok, is it the fact that you love me and yoy want to stay... since when did you know me for giving 6th chances..since when did you know me for being so nice..and now im gone and im never comming back..

Comments

[Jenna894]

i loves it
i write songs to
check them out(i only have one so far though)
10/5

[ibrokethecrayons]

This is awesome, Gabberz! Wow. 4/5. Like Emo said, you should put it in separate lines to make it easier to read. ^^

[emo0213]

can u edit it its hard to follow like put it in different lines

by the way poems dont have to rhyme