You...

• Artist: -Side-Kicks-Karate-Babe-
• Description: How I thought of this poem is because a lot of people complain about their lives. And I want to tell people you don't have more than one life. And that they can make something of themselves if they try.
• Date: 11/29/2008
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There is only one you...
One life...
One time...
You can't take someone else's life...
All the other lives are taken...
You think you can get a new life...
But, you can't...
Don't just sit there...

Comments

[destinee613]

dear unexpected wish,
i dont see you writing a good poem. dont be a hater just because she has skills and you dont.

[destinee613]

Wow. that poem is inspirational. it sends a message to everyone saying live your life to the fullest and if you arent happy with who you are than YOU have to change it, no one can change it for you! I LOVE IT!!!!

[-Little-Miss-Something-]

hey dont worry about what other people say i think it was great!!!!

[unexpectedWish]

I agree with the message you put into this poem completely. Though, I think you should change the three periods at the end of each line though and either make them commas or periods. Every line seems like its missing part of another phrase.