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thanku for sending me that chain letter
i dont know what but when i read it...
i felt... good?
before i felt like my life was horribal.
and i knew that it was as a matter of fact...
horribal
i had absolutly no friends,
i never ate,
and my work sucked
and this letter made me feel well... happy
while i read it my insides felt like they were warming up.
my heart was starting to feel like it was actually beating,
my lungs didnt hurt when i took a single breath,
i felt light headed like there was somthing next to me...
something warm, something nice
now when ever i take a step that "warm" sensation bubbles up inside me.
when i take a breath it feels like im soaking in the sweetest smelling flower.
and when i spoke,
well lets just say that i felt like i was flying
and then one day somthing happend.
someone walked up to me.
... it was a boy
he looked like an angel.
with perfect eyes like the ocean blue
he told me that he was in my class all year.
and that i looked like i never like anything,
or anyone.
he said that when ever he saw me like that
he said that he wanted to cry.
he said that i was nothing
and then when he saw me all nice and happy,and warm
he noticed me
he made a huge smile
he walked up to me
and he said that i was full of life.
and then all of a sudden...
we went out
and i never noticed ever before...
that when he walked up to me.
and i was cold.
and when he wraped his arm around me.
he felt warm,
and i felt warm
me heart sped up
and when i took in a breath.
it was HIM that smelled like the sweetest smelling flower.
and when he breathed on me and i breathed in his breath.
it smelled like mint and honey
and my heart almost always stopped when he leaned in and kissed me
he told me that i was special
he told me that he never wanted to let go of me
so he didnt...and i didnt
and now. now were happy, together.
so what i was and am saying is.
thanku for that chain letter you sent me
if it werent for you i would still be at home
on my bed
staring at the wall
doing nothing
saying nothing and feeling nothing
so thanku.
for making my life...
actually a life worth living
heart
- by Byungkitty |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: thanku
- Artist: Byungkitty
- Description: i made this poem while i was saying thanku to my sister for sending me this chain letter. but yet at the same time i was also saying sorry to my lover. so either way i think this poem means alot to some people... even though its long!!
- Date: 11/28/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ulquoirria Schiffer - 10/11/2009
- so sweet
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- _Pajamas_On_Wednesday_ - 01/31/2009
- Spelling Nazi: lot of errors.
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- FredoNitro - 11/29/2008
- srry to long for reading
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- captain cassie - 11/29/2008
- holy crap thats long!
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