Darkest Farewell^

• Artist: --Dark-Disciple-Dan--
• Description: Poem inspired by the song "One" from Metallica^
  Enjoy
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: darkest farewell

Sweet Surrender, mind this as the melancholic cries from a battered soul.
For what more can a man gain from his life once the end is so near?
Bring more to me of that bitter cup, so foul
To all my beloved I apologize for the farewell they shall never hear.

Sweet Surrender, deaf, blind and mute.
Take away my ears to rid that wretched tone, acute.
At last to thee I shall forbade my screams
For none but YOU has eyes to see my mortal wounds

Sweet Surrender, my last and truest friend
I beseech you to embrace my parting words
For no one else will ever have such honor
As to see me one last time.

Comments

[--Dark-Disciple-Dan--]

Hey, Perfection lies within personal conception of ultimate completion, so although I'm flattered by the comments, I'm afraid if I say I've reached perfection, then there wouldn't be a need to write anymore...
No.
I'm still shooting for it, so hopefully with the next ones to come I'll be a little closer to that goal^

[beautiful darkside]

I'm a writer, yet I can't write like that! That is perfection. :]

[Vampire Ena]

i love it...im a writer too!

[kingmufasa]

one nice poem an metallica is qan awsome band i like the day that never comes that songs good too

[x Pipkin x]

Wow, that's really good.
I'm not good at writing poems myself, but this is really good.