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I remember backing YOU up during fights
Giving YOU the hug
Laughing at YOUR jokes
And most of all being YOUR BFF
But now...
We are in the fight
I'm hugging the people you hurt
Laughing at everyone elses jokes
And now hateing you
This is what happens when we are apart
Now your dying
Its hard to fix our fight
The last breath you draw is when I cry
And when I realize
We shouldnt have been this way
I remember your smile
And I remember the hate
The way you cried and the way you died
If I could see you again
I would do it in a heartbeat
I hope to know you again
Without a fight or a kill
So don't fight
It's not right.
- by Xx_BrokenCrystal_xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: ○o• broken •o○
- Artist: Xx_BrokenCrystal_xX
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- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: obrokeno
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lilevil21 - 04/09/2009
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its decent but it doesnt explain a lot like how they died and why you turned against them
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- icelestial_nightmare - 03/01/2009
- thats more like a ..... Not poem O_o thats what it is... its just sorta like a message screaming out to that person u were with.... its not really a poem. there is no message.
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- omnomNOM de Plume - 02/08/2009
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Get rid of the ellipses (the three dots) ALL of them. You use the word fight to much. Try a synonym. It should be "A fight"
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- TikTokTikTok - 12/31/2008
- scary............
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- Xx_BrokenCrystal_xX - 12/30/2008
- Comments are important....Please!
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