my poem/song.that dosent ryhme

• Artist: Envious Heartbreak
• Description: poem that came to me in a dream:
  a man sitting in a bar...discouraged because his wife left him then he heard her sweet voice sing a song and it brought him to tears...is sorta how it came into play...
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: song love

Let your love flutter like a butterfly in the wind.
Let your sorrow drift away like a bird in the rain.
Keep me in your mind for I am your soul
Don't let me go for I freely give your love to you.

Let your tears fall down like a water fall.
Let your body fall down on the cold hard ground.
Keep me in your mind for I am your soul
Don't let me go for I freely give your love to you.

May my love to you be like gold.
May your hearts desire be met by me.
Keep me in your mind for I am your soul
Don't let me go for I freely give your love to you.

heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart

Comments

[Envious Heartbreak]

yes...i repeated it

[Vincent_Iscariot_Key]

Very interesting, especially with the imagery, but there is one thing, I would like to know, is was the third line is repeated for a purpose?

[brok3n_NiiKKii]

ur good i love it