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A sudden presence.
He arrives through the pining air.
The wind has left the holly
To carry him here.
I wave my sleeping hand
To his lasting face:
A bright pure symbol
Displacing our pasts,
Perfect as a candle
At a yuletide feast.
Christmas Eve,
Each stained-glass dream
Filters his acceptance.
He's mid-winter himself
Stretching white-angled wings
To shadow the star and spire.
Our thoughts exchange-
As a wealth of presents
In his frost-feeling night.
Low fires and incense feed the
Hours. The far hours which carry
The Holy Gift:
A love complete,
Stepping, between
The stars.
- by Naruto Shippuden 29 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: Spirited
- Artist: Naruto Shippuden 29
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Description:
I had a homework assignment for school to write a Christmas poem.
So, this is the one I wrote and almost won county poetry contest in. - Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: spirited
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- jgirl39 - 02/22/2009
- Experiment with capitalization - not every line has to start with a capital letter. Also, some of the syllables are weird (To his lasting face - the stress is on "to", which is an unimportant word). I really like the line breaks, and the concept is good.
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