in my hour of darkness

• Artist: huntedxangel
• Description: ummm...wat do you think? i did this off the top of my head sooo if you have any objections feel free to post them..and ik its kind of random but this is my first
• Date: 11/24/2008
• Tags: hour darkness

As i walk alone through the labyrinth of dreams,
I try to find my way without light, sight, or sound.
i walk alone blind and deaf
my only wish is to escape my death.

Try as i might i cannot escape the fate to which i am bound.
Their are no rules in this maze of webs of complicated matter.
It is a journey that i must complete inside my mind.


Here and there i catch glimpses of something;
something to far away to see or touch
I feel that i need that to carry on.

After an endless amount of time spent traveling through time
I find the answer to my riddle.
The reason the plants grow is not because of magic
but simply because they wish to.

And the light i was looking for was not in a candle or even a star
it was there burning small and steady inside my heart.
Remember this...though you may journey far, and meet many dangers
do not let that light be diminished.

Comments

[maydaymouse]

That's really good for off the top of your head, it would usually take me a lot longer to get something close to this good. sweatdrop But I say a 5/5 =3

[huntedxangel]

heyy thanx appreciate it

[Pixelation Hallucination]

Very nice, I would suggest adding capitalletters and maybe more punctuation

Giving you a five, though. <3