Bad day

• Artist: Pit1303
• Description: a poem I wrote while I was having a bad day.
  the poems lines alternate.
  every second line is about the music and your actions
  the other lines are about what your thinking for the most part.
  hence the alternating colours.
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: poem terrible dream music

Sometimes nothing goes right
The music blasts
Sometimes you’re feeling every emotion
You turn it up
Sometimes you want something so bad
The song feels boring
Sometimes everything makes you mad
You switch it
Sometimes you lie there, staring up
The music has more drums
Sometimes it isn’t enough
Your attention leaves the song
You’re so damn bored
You turn away
You’re wondering why
You hate it
You’re slipping from reality
You throw it away
You’re eyes close
You drop your pencil
Dreams fill you
The song ends
Your wish is granted
Today is a day
The dream is peaceful
You wanted to throw away
You awaken
Feeling better
The bad day is gone.

Comments

[ibrokethecrayons]

I think this is a very interesting poem. 5/5!