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He smiled as he strolled across,
Leaving prints upon the ground:
Stepping down through fragile frost,
Exposing land of earthen brown.
The blades of grass bended ‘neath him,
Bouncing back as he passed through,
Poking up from where his feet
Crunched and broke the frozen dew.
Once his pathway full was marked,
He looked back at the grass and moss.
The empty, iced patch, once so stark,
An artistic path now slowly crossed.
“A pleasant sight,” he thought right then
And turned to wander on his way.
“What pauses, smiling, I’ll begin
To those who pass this path today.”
Nary a minute after, fate
Sent one more person past the sight.
He looked with disdain at the prints
Pressed slowly into pristine white.
“What a lovely frost, indeed,
This was,” he pondered. “So, then, who
Would think to cut across the weeds
And ruin them by walking through?”
- by Lady Lagomorph |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Frosted Grass
- Artist: Lady Lagomorph
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Description:
I had some autumn-themed Dove chocolates, with fall-themed comments inside the wrappers. One encouraged me to "walk across frost-covered grass, leaving footprints," and this poem came to mind.
There are a few main concepts - Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, artistic work is up to interpretation, and that someone can spend lots of time creating something to have it quickly disliked by another ( it takes twice as many lines for the first person as the second). - Date: 11/21/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- HiddenUntoldMystery - 11/24/2008
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"The blades of grass bended ‘neath him," that part disrupts the flow... I suggest trying to find another word besides " 'neath".
Other than that, amazing. I love the duality, and the whole feel of the poem. *5* - Report As Spam
- PeachyZim - 11/23/2008
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Wow. Inspired by Dove chocolate. Thats.....nice.
Its a very pretty poem though, I give it a 7/10 - Report As Spam