He Caught my Stare

• Artist: Roxie0616
• Description: Don't you feel like this sometimes?
• Date: 11/21/2008
• Tags: caught stare

He caught my stare,

I stare back waiting for him to turn away

But seems like hours; we’re already reading each others minds

Examining through deep thoughts, knowing we both got it right this time

He blinks quickly, awaking from his daydreams as those quick brown eyes capture me and take me into a whole new world. It feels as if I see no one but him

it's some sort of trap, I don’t mind being in

Its way too late now to turn away from his perfectly crafted face. A part of me didn't want to look away, all I'm thinking 'God really is quite the artist.'
His eyes just so peculiar, so bright, friendly, and full of love and joy that I never noticed before…

…I can’t even start to explain his precious crooked smile

Now I'm addicted, praying nothing could snap me out of his gaze ♥

Comments

[koigirl]

ive felt like this befor only he never looked at me but i like this peom good job

[Kaoiji TM]

Very enjoyable, as for this not making sense as previous posts before me said, it makes perfect sense, if you continue to write. keep things flowing as nicely as this one. 5/5

[Golden Sarah-Belle]

i really like it, but the end doesnt make sense. you've made this big deal of loving staying in his gaze, then you want to get out? i'd change the 2nd to last line a little and take out the last. ill give you a 5/5 anyway. biggrin

[-N4tUr4LlY_DiStUrBeD-]

that was so sweet i loved it.