why couldnt you end it?

• Artist: Meepa_chan_is_a_MW
• Description: Ok this comes from a really dark part of my mind, that sometimes consumes me totaly.....i know it sounds really emo, but this is what i am feeling inside, and i have to let it out.
  IF YOU DONT HAVE ANYTHING NICE TO SAY NO COMMENTS!
  this is my writting so no copying without permisson or saying its not mine.
  ~love soubi
  p.s. thanks for reading. disclaimer: the anime girl pic is not by me, just inspiration.
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: suicidal emotional sorrow feelings hatred

Your eyes trickle with poisonous tears and you tell me” it’ll all be over soon,” all your pain agony and your stress, think about a light, peaceful, and silence which will take you away." Your smirk burns in my memory, and you pull out sharp glass and whisper, "just be quiet." The glass glimmers against my tear stricken face. “I will do this,” you say in a quiet voice that trembles. Glass presses against my soft and pink flesh, and pain flows over my face. I look down and you say “you deserve this, a place to escape; you need someone to take you away and save you from this.” You slide the glass shared down to my neck, and push so hard crimson blood falls in pools on the ground,” GET IT OVER WITH!” I yell as loud as my raspy voice will go. You drop the glass and I fall to the floor, and I stare up at you, for you do the same as me, and fall, defeated, to the ground. “I’m too scared to do it…..” you say looking to the ground, your eyes fill and pool over.

Comments

[xX_black emo girl15_Xx]

i liked it its sad and all pple have sometimes this feeling its ok cool poem 4/5

[malena estel]

i loved this peom it reminds me alot of myself i write about my feelings too on this arena thingy if you want to check any of mine out i would appreciate it >.<

[pom_pom_destruction]

i very much like ouyr work... people call me emo but i dont mind your mind sounds confused and imaginitive or clear and free, no other way some one could have such beauty of hands, no other would have such a beautiful art that could be tuped onto the pages