Every Step

• Artist: Animal_Girl94
• Description:
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: every step

Every step I take I wonder if its my last
You never know in this dark world
I can never see around the next corner,
the next sign,
or the next inch
Run away is what I want to do,
but there is nowhere to run and hide
This dark world is crule,
it is hard,
scary,
and a killer
We don't care about the Earth,
the thing that lets us keep our lifes
I wonder when my last step will be,
soon,
later,
never we will never know our futures

Comments

[Notsuki guinea pig]

This is great, really relates to the world.
Try to fix your mistakes.

[HipHopDanceRgirl]

Sorry for the words I spelled wrong LOL got a baby in my lap.=/

[HipHopDanceRgirl]

I like this poem because it's the truth.You sound creative.One thing i'd like to point ou though.
cruel is how it's spelled and when you put 'its' put it's.It'll soung better.Not trying to offend you at all.Correcting things is just what i'm good at. smile