a slow time

• Artist: lil-miss-lonie
• Description: just a poem for emo's really just how i feel and what i think
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: slow time

its a slow time
as i it in my corner
wishing i wasn't here
Ive done nothing wrong
but still i get the blame again

its a slow time
I'm wishing someone would save me
but no one knows were i lie
so i sit here all day and night
all alone till forever may end

its a slow time
cuz Ive slit my wrist
and I'm slowly bleeding to death
its a slow time
so just let me go
as i slowly slip away
its a slow time

Comments

[iCryPurpleTears]

the times are changing, ppl, what's there left to be happy about? n e wayz, nice poem!

[emo_callie13]

I found this extremely good untill I got to the last part of it. I actually thought it was about child abuse and I was thrilled by the fact of some one had the bravery to write something about the effects or anything for that matter to with the subject.But no.Ending's rushed and it contradicts itself.

[tksunshine93]

It's a nice poem, I like it and I'm not "emo" or at least not what one usually labels as emo. But I agree with Rial Geist, though I feel like a hypocrite saying it because practically everything I write is sad, where is the happiness?

[Rial Geist]

spelling mistake, and emo poems suck, what ever happened to happiness

[xxkatie_in_th3_mom3ntomxx]

lol go emoz is good