Fly

• Artist: Twilight_freak2467
• Description: This is a little something I whipped up 2 day. It's not much but hey it's poetry. If you like it and want me to keep writing I need donations. I will try to pay for it but I'm short on money. Please post and tell me what u think =D
• Date: 11/01/2008
• Tags: flying

I run, I walk, I skip, I crawl,

But there is one thing I can't do at all.

I look and listen for this chance,

But still, not yet.

I take the last breath of hope I had,

and trip, I fell, where is that chance?

Now I cannot run, or walk, or skip, or crawl,

For there is one thing, I have fallen.

I take another breath, wait for the chance,

spread my wings and flap, flap, flap.

Now I look over the hard times ahead,

and remember when I couldn't fly,

and when I had thought, I'd fallen through the sky.

Comments

[fancy girls88]

OMG I so like this poem 5/5.......good job
you know I got a poem too
look for the title "tree"
hope you like my poem too

[Twilight_freak2467]

yea like I said I kind of rushed

[Snowy rain13]

weird....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[BlondeXmafiaxX]

i can relate to this...

[Starry Starry Fright]

You're got potential as a poet but your timing and syntax are a little off...