-Blood-

• Artist: Death-master-pyros
• Description: Just a short peom about dieing. my friends say its "depressing", but i want you to tell me what you think. no i'm not emo.
• Date: 11/01/2008
• Tags: blood

That crimson liquid flowing through my vains
The warmth of it in me
The thought of it spilling out
Spilling onto the table, then the floor
A knife
Cutting
The blood
Passing out
Gone
Darkness
Alone
No more?
Why?
Where did it go?
Isn't there anymore?
Voices
People
Friends calling my name
Can't talk
Lost too much, blood
Growing cold
More darkness
A ray of light
Warmth
Going to it
Friends continue to call me by my name
I see everyone
But they don't see me, why?
I leave them for the light
I'm gone
Dead
They cry over me
Sadness
Sorrow
Tears
They'll get over it
I'm just one less person in the world
I'm gone
FOREVER

Comments

[rissyx]

thats gorgeeouuss: ) it seems to just fade away.

[musicbyme]

its really good and for me everyone that is dyeing every second rite now matters but then i hope and hope they wont close their eyes forever but will live another lives

[DemeaningMeaning]

t'is a good one, and i write from my heart too. This is what we all face everyday. The thought of death never goes away. Wow i just rhymed! smile Keep up the good work!!

[konochi_of_death]

this is such a beautiful poem. And it's true too. my poems come from my heart, it seems yours do too. My poems are all depressing, but then again my life wreaks hovoc on my soul. ^.^ good job