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I want to tell you something,
i have a lot to say
but i dont have the rite words
So, Im a say it a different way
Im going to draw a picture,
but see theres a twist
Ima use a razor as the pencil
and the paper is ma wrist
you shouldnt worry you did this once before,
you put me in a dark room and locked the door
you told me everything was going to be alright,
but u lied
you grabbed me by my hand
and told me "dont you cry"
i told you no, but you wouldnt listen
you knew i was weak because of all the drinks
you threw me on the bed,
and went straight for my neck
i kicked you hard enough 2 get you off,
but that only pissed you off
you hit me a few times,
and you didnt care anymore if i cried
i tried to scream, but no one would listen
so since My psyche tattered and misused
everything that belonged to me, you abused.
So how does it feel to get inside of me
Without my permission and ignoring my loud pleas?
Stripping me of my innocence, physically and mentally.
but how would you know whats real pain if all you did was cause it,
so since all you saw was blood an the sheets
you shouldnt mind the blood on my wrist
This letter was written because of you
no strings attached to it just a little bit of pain
remembering youre little smile once u were done,
made me end my life this way
- Title: the pain within
- Artist: NtRSJoKEr
- Description: its about rape, its real deep in a way so please tell me what you think
- Date: 10/28/2008
- Tags: pain within
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DoIphins - 12/23/2008
- When I Read This It Kinda Reminds Me Of Something I Read Called Speak
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- xXUltima_SoraXx - 12/18/2008
- That was interesting, and amazing... although i hope you weren't writing this about your own personal experience O.o
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- Mr Vash the Needle Noggin - 12/17/2008
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im srry i dnt like it very much........it's too depressing...
(then again my poems are too..) - Report As Spam
- brokebitchbutfun2bwit - 12/17/2008
- I cried as I felt the pain deep inside. I went through a similar thang for an entire five year. I hope you get the person put away . I feel truth, and emotions. my heart goes out to you, and i hope and pray that you can recover, because i have never, and i can relate. keep up the good work. I also write about my feelings.
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- Jeannie87 - 12/02/2008
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dammmn!!! i didnt no u had dat kinda mad skillz n ya...i luv it!!! thatz like....juzt....wow....
there iz allot of emotion behind it and ya painted a very clear picture n mii mind...i cant wait ta read ur next poem! ^^ - Report As Spam
- NtRSJoKEr - 10/29/2008
- thanks for your comments im glad you liked my poem, and thank you for being honest
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- rich milk chocolate - 10/28/2008
- this is hella deep. whoever wrote this is a very good writer and should write more. i really like it and i can somehow relate to it. i enjoyed reading it and hope you write more
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