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I had thought that the feeling would last
I had thought the story was true
But I never knew these events could come to pass
And I never knew true pain, until I lost you
I dwelled and dwelled but nothing changed
I felt un-needed, and tossed like trash
But then I realized, I needed to alter my range
and then I burned my life and scattered the ash
I picked up the pieces and searched for a new path
I looked around and saw nothing but darkness
But my rage had found me, and I felt my own wrath
and I fought myself and lost, my heart fell to nothingness
I was lost once again when a light showed me the way
I followed the path and was led to the morn.
But I felt a tug and watched as they were made to pay
And my heart sank, I had never before seen such scorn
I tried to run but my efforts were lost
I went forward, struck myself, and felt the pain
But my deed was done, and I knew the cost
and the sword cut me deep, but I knew it was not in vain
I finally found my reason to be
I had stopped myself, and found my way
But then she came to me, cared for me
And I found that, even hero's eventually decay
I now had my light and knew the end was near
I reached forward and felt warmth once again
But people said that it was nothing, and would disappear
And I forged my own path, and threw away the pain
I had lost and gained
I had fought and lost
But my light still found a way through the pain
And I knew that we would continue on, no matter the cost
- Title: Struggles held within.*
- Artist: FDSuprema
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I don't really have a title for it, if anyone can come up with a title you can post it along with your comments. The current title is just something a came up with on the spot and I don't think it's good enough.....
It's a Poem btw... just fyi - Date: 10/27/2008
- Tags: struggles held within
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dark Nights 1305 - 11/17/2009
- maybe the title could be "fought and lost" just a idea
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- Dark Nights 1305 - 11/17/2009
- this is really good!!!!!
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- xoxDemented Angelxox - 10/27/2008
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oh and i do like poems too MAYB E THE TITLE COULD BE
FEELINGS LAT FOREVER ITS JUST MY THOUGHT - Report As Spam
- xoxDemented Angelxox - 10/27/2008
- im sorry nobody likes your poems but i do you do have that sparkle for you know writing keep going aim high and never give up!!!!!!!!!!!!!*mwah*
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