Why?

• Artist: DiexToxSurvive
• Description: a short sad little poem i randomly wrote one night...enjoy and plz comment (i need some1 to tell me if my poetry sucks or not...)
• Date: 10/24/2008
• Tags: sadness depression bitterness alone

Have you no sympathy?
Can't you see,
What you're doing to me?
I'm falling apart,
And you're just going to leave me in the dark?
You only care for yourself,
And no one else.
Just hear me,
Listen to me.
Please don't abandon me.
I'm dying on the inside.
I never wanted to pick a side.

Comments

[AH-Closed]

its a good work! and your poems are providing insight for me. Thanks

[kitkatkitty11]

i like it good job!

[iifawkhawdiimoreii]

cool