can you see me?

• Artist: Sexual_Socks
• Description: i feel like im invisible sometimes! i just wanted to let my feelings show
• Date: 10/23/2008
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you sit
i talk
you leave
i nod
i feel invisible
as you walk off
into the night
walking away from me
we have been friends forever
what happened today?
you have never done that before
you leave me out again
why are you doing this to me?
am i still your friend?
you push me aside and chase yours friends
then you ask me to buy you a pop
forget it know way
you just broke my heart!
why can't you see what you are doing
the hurt i feel inside
i mask it over with a happy smile
but im still dying inside!
help me stop fading
fading from the earth
you stab me
and you don't come back
i should cry right now
but i hold back the tears and fight for life
i don't want to fade for good
you look at me from across the grounds
and i give alittle shrug
you walk to me and say whats wrong?
but i just walk away
you watch me from where you stand.
I turn around the fence
you walk after me
but quit
why can't you see?
you hurt me in a way no guy has hurt me before
i can't go back theres no way passed that closing door
you shut me out i tried to fight
but still you didn't see
i was standing on that step begging and pleading
you shut me away left in the cold
away from the light
i might as well stay hidden in dark then face what light can bring
i sit at home and watch some toons
but man that doesn't help
i go from door to door of friends
but they too shut me out!
so what will my sorry life bring to me
no love
no care
nobody for me
so what else is there here?
should i fade forever?
should i just be gone?
but then something reaches for me
a light a bug a face?
its soothing and sweet
i just can't resist!
you pull up into your arms
infront of everyone
and tell me not to walk alone
because you are the one
i give deep gray sad smile and kiss his cheek softly
but he closed me out again
and now i don't feel too sorry

Comments

[RiikoxSoushi]

Ugg...I hate it when I feel invisable, like you talk and your words are ignored, or when u or lonley no one comes...I can really relate to this smile Great job 5/5

[ninja-kyoko-chan]

i know a friend who feels the same way
but the guy never hugged or kissed her
he knows she likes him
man life sucks sometimes, doesn't it?

[Taijia_Sango]

you have some spelling and punctuation errors you may wnat to fix. They take away from the effectiveness of your poem.

Seems like it is a string of consciousness most of the time but that works for this. Pretty good