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Cold snow falling down
Gently touching my dark heart
Beating so slowly
In fear of tearing apart
My tears fall, already ice
- by Childishly Mature |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2008 |
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- Title: Depressing Tanka
- Artist: Childishly Mature
- Description: this is a tanka i wrote, and in case you dont know, a Tanka is like a haiku, but its got 2 more lines with 7 syllables each, making a total of 31 syllables
- Date: 10/17/2008
- Tags: tanka
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Deadlylight6 - 04/20/2010
- i love tankas and haikus. this was really good adn i enjoyed it. keep writing and ill keep reading
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- CrowleysGirl - 10/17/2008
- that is very descriptive... i like it!
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- shezacutie - 10/17/2008
- ive never heard of a tanka before but i really like what u wrote.
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