My Heavenly Question

• Artist: Inari-Dono
• Description: *smiles* I wrote this not but 2 weeks ago for a girl in my college engligh class and the professor let me stand infront of the class and read it see if you can read the final line **hint: bolded letters**
• Date: 10/16/2008
• Tags: heavenly question love romance couples

Will you walk with me,
Into the deep blue ocean sea.
Leaving the bright and beaming light,
Loving the cool and gentle night.

You gaze at me with kind warm looks,
Over and over you read me like a book,
Under a castnet sky next to a beautuful brook.

Gates of the divine have finally been opened,
One of heavens angels is the center of this devotion.

Out of the sky you have come to me,
Undone is my heart and only you hold the key,
The thought of your lips pressed to mine I feel carefree

We will walk hand in hand,
Into the sunset along beaches of sand.
This is a riddle in its truest form,
Holding time, i wait for your return.

May I help you read and you will find,
Each first letter of every line.

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Comments

[Morbidly Fascinating]

beautifully creative smile

[Syemilah]

er...'will you go out with me'?
cool!!!

[Inari-Dono]

thank you all for your kind words and for the record she said yes

[Xtime turns fragileX]

This was simply just... Breath-taking. I love t, and if she said "no" then she needs to get some common sense! I'd say yes if it were me in her shoes! xD

[river_maya17]

super nyce

[BumbleBeeSex_]

Favorited, and rated a 5

At first, my impression was like...WOAH if that is a minor and still in HS, MS, or whatever...they are much of a prodigy and then I saw your description and I was very happy because as a minor I would never achieve much more than that.

I want to be a poet or novelist...but that really did intreague me. I was quite envious for a second and then found out you were a college student. Either way, simply beautiful and such a creative way of asking for someones heart.