far below

• Artist: breakyaface
• Description: this is my newist write on october 11,i thinks its ok, dident take me long to wrie, so might not be great, but read it anyway. i dont gotspell check and i cant spell and make sloppy mistaks. PLEASE tell me what you think, and PLEASE read my other poems i got many on gaia. thank you, hope you enjoy your reading.
• Date: 10/11/2008
• Tags: below fall love changes oakley

you fell far below
the standerds
fell down to where everyone loses it all
you thought it would never happin
but you fell right where i live
the place between
somebody and nobody
you fell far below

people like you never fall
they always trip
but never fall
but you fell far below
and now its up to me?
to help you get back?
people like you
alienate unless for
selfish intentions
so befor i help you escalate
"why are you so far below?"

" your so far below for someone?
if theres one thing if learned
no one will like you if they dont like you
so never go changing becouse you want something
if its over a boy dont camafloge yourself
to hunt the pray
becuse they always know something is there"

your a somebody but you want a nobody
so you want me to change you to a nobody?
well,
if been here befor
we "nobodys" as you "somebodys" call us
never get a true girl
unless they start a "nobody"
so no, im not changing you
____________________________________________________________
never chnage youself for someone
if they dont like you for you never chase them
even if you "love" them
becouse they will never love YOU
they will love what you have twisted and changed into
witch you will lose what you had and gain nothing
so dont change over ANYBODY
even if your told its a change for the better
live your life as you
and not what they want you to be!
dont fall far below yourself to find what you wish to be
exclaim

Comments

[G R i M R A P 3 R]

another good one. damn, you write too much. but in a good way. i hope you get published someday. all of these are extremely great. hey, you got your head shaved for me.. xD jk.

[Grigori Federov]

Nice free verse. I'm not a fan of that but the content was there and it was good. Oh, and if you need someone to spellcheck before you submit something I'll do it.