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She moves her body
A fluid motion
Each step in depth
Just like the ocean...
As cool as she kept
She made others burn
She loved as I watched
For the fire I yearned...
The moves she made
From first to last
On air she danced
Agile and Fast...
With guile
She seized my attention
Commanding my eyes
To follow her without question...
Her motion slows
The music dies
The fire fades
From her eyes....
She stops altogether
My vision hazed
Then she vanished
My Temptress Ablaze
- Title: My Temptress Ablaze
- Artist: Cryssys
- Description: A simple poem I just came up with! Hope everyone likes it!
- Date: 10/07/2008
- Tags: temptress ablaze
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Goldenhawk Ampris - 12/31/2009
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who is this SHE???
cool poem... - Report As Spam
- Daishidragon - 03/22/2009
- Love it !!
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- II j u n i a r t II - 12/14/2008
- omfg...i wish i was as good as u
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- Lela01 - 10/15/2008
- Nice job... smile
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- KJ-SexyAngel - 10/14/2008
- sweet.. ^.^
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- GUY92 - 10/08/2008
- Nice goin man i nvr seen this side of u.....No Homo
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- Ecliptic_Darkness - 10/07/2008
- oh that is bad a**
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