Your words burn!!

• Artist: Nightlit sky207
• Description: I hate this ladie that really got under my skin with her sensitivity She would understand everything you say she would connect to you in the greatest of ways, one time she just wasn't there for me. It's hard for me to deal with because she is my neighbor and I see her house from my porch!
  She was also my reading and writing teacher and she helped me do poetry so well! Now I poetically write this poem about her.
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: your words burn

Your words burn deep in to my skin
You think your done but you will never win

I am intelligent and I am strong
I am right and you are wrong

I have listened to your complaining
I have learned that you think your caring

I will say that you are daring
I will say that you aren't sharing

I know your deepest emotions
I know you have no devotions

I like to see you suffer over the dumbest stuff
you think your going through times that are tough

but you really are not!
you've gotten your self in a selfish knot

I think you can teach me things that I can learn
I don't want to here them though, because your words burn!

Comments

[Knit Purl Knit]

In the last sentence, it's the wrong here/hear, it's supposed to be "hear". Other than that, wonderful. (Sorry, about the nitt-picky-ness, it's just how I am.)