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Come sink thine fangs into mine neck,
The sight of the moon hast put me in a reck,
The sound of thine's breathing hast caused me to stutter,
For I feel mine heart dancing and my lids start to flutter.
I feel the pain and cry out with joy,
For thine spell hast turned me so coy,
Mine eyes open wide for I feel my fangs growing,
Thine venom of love has kept mine madness from showing.
I am now like you come close to me here,
For thou lookst so scrumptious, shalt I call you near?
-inola de'barderac heart
- by CosmicEnby |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: Vampire Bliss
- Artist: CosmicEnby
- Description: one of my good poems.
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: vampire bliss
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Comments (7 Comments)
- bluecrystals08 - 02/24/2009
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I rly enjoyed this poem. I liked how you portrayed the emotions and changing into a vampire. It reminds me of Twilight or some part of the movie Queen of the Damned.
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- Scheria Nile - 10/05/2008
- lolz..twilight...
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- CosmicEnby - 10/05/2008
- actually, funny enough, i started reading twilight recently...finished it too. i wrote this way before twilight...i don't mind checking your poems either. the key for catchy poetry is; rhyme, not more than 11 words per line, no less than 5-6, find a common and attractive topic, and if need help rhyming use "rhymer.com" or search rhyming dictionaries through google. i never use them because i already have the poem created in my mind. Thanks for the comments!
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- Arisada-sama - 10/04/2008
- LAWL
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- samantha38 - 10/04/2008
- vampires rule
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- janek p swiatek - 10/04/2008
- im gessing you like twilight
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- liquidrone - 10/04/2008
- how do i write my own poem?
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