A Million Pieces

• Artist: Zelda 1005
• Description: We had a poetry competition at my school, and I submitted this poem. Also, this poem does NOT refer to me, it refers to homeless people. This poem expresses my true feelings, because it is hard being homeless, with no-one to love or care for you.
  Thank you!
• Date: 10/04/2008
• Tags: million pieces

Living in a solitary world
I have an urge to see the light
I want to live, can't you see?
I'm longing for a home
With a family to love and care for me.
I want to be loved.
I cannot live under these clouds of misery any longer.
My shadow is forever gloomy and dead.
I want to be loved, although its difficult.
I reach out for you, but you are unobtainable,
Since I live in this solitary world.
Pacing down these unknown streets again and again
They are never-ending, and I will continue walking
They sky is covered by a veil of tragedy and doom
Please help me, can't you see?
I want to be loved
I need to be free
I have to escape from this dark room of agony
This torture, this pain, it's never-ending
The pieces of my heart will forever and ever
Be shattered into a million pieces
I want to be free...

Comments

[Zelda 1005]

Thank you everyone for all your comments! I really appreciate them! smile

[-LightCaster-]

"They sky is covered by a veil of tragedy and doom"

i think it is a typographical error, it should be "The"

the poem is very beautiful.

[Happy_Joan_Tachado]

Wow I love it

[Jeff Labbe is single]

wow! it's beautiful! but so sad...cheer up, you! ^^