Muse

• Artist: CoffeeAndSpiders
• Description: A poem I wrote, by far my favorite and the one I consider to be my best. I really do love this one.
  And just to give you some incite, it's not about a girl I love or anything like that, and I have sort of given up on keeping secrets about my old art works, so I'll go ahead and go ahead say that it's mostly about my muse, my inspiration, and how I picture it. Everything I enjoy and love really. Something I will never have, but surely something I will never give up on.
• Date: 10/02/2008
• Tags: muse

Like the moon that parts the clouds every night
She comes to me again
The one that haunts my mind
The one I cannot find

With a voice like glass
and tasseled hair
With eyes that are longing
and sing of despair

The mists clear
The ravens cry
My heart erodes
and she is here

Whispering lullabies that leave me speechless.
Whole.
Running her hands across my cheek
fragile, so pale.

Our loves are one
ours souls are free

She disappears
Never to be

Comments

[Artsy Kitsune]

very discriptive and traditional poem GJ 5/5

[Kokuryuu]

Oh, I like the imagery depicted here - very nice, ephemeral. The moonlight was a good metaphor and setting.

Question though - why is it "Muse"?

[CoffeeAndSpiders]

thanks bunnie.


and no, cheloa, it's not a mistake... it's really suppose to be like that.
Sorry if it doesn't make sense to you.

[papershelf i c i c l e s]

very nicely written. kudos. the one line doesnt really make sense though.. mistake in typing perhaps...?
"With eyes that are longing/ and sing of despair"

[iBrightScales]

I like this one a lot.
It's much better than most things I come across on here.
I hope to see more from you in the near future <3